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Romance: High Heels in New York - Contemporary Romance (Fashion Series Book One) Kindle Edition
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This review is going to be a little tough because there are lots of what I call wobbles. The first thing to note is the characters that are built, are both shallow and incredibly frustrating. They lack traits that make readers fall in love with them and although Melissa tries to push forward this strong, dutiful woman it feels vague and unbelievable. There’s just a lack of depth. The writing is also (really unfortunately) poor in it’s entirety. If you ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes the consistency errors are awful. At one point we hear a lot about a character going to visit a city and all the places she wants to go. When we go to the city it’s a completely different one with completely different tourist hot-spots, not to mention a characters name changes entirely for a few chapters – SORRY WHUT!
As you might imagine this makes the plot difficult to pull together. Not only does the story jump all over the place but the sub-plots are a little confused and get muddled with the rest of the characters. It doesn’t feel consistent and it makes it difficult to keep a hold of the plot-line.Read more ›
The only downside was there was quite a few errors in the book, spelling errors mainly but a few times the wrong characters name was there and then it went back to who the character was originally. Perhaps needs re-editting. But over all a good read
Spoilers: The police told one of the main characters her fiance had a car, she new nothing about it, yet several chapters later she instantly recognised the licence plate? A room was ransacked but the item they were looking for was not discovered, although it was in a shoe box in a cupboard full of shoes that had been ransacked? They would of found it. What guy would hide something in one of his wife's she box?
It did not explain how the main character all of a sudden declared she was the mother of a girl she really didn't like, no reference or hint that this girl was her daughter, or that she had any idea she was the mother to this person. A transplant was needed, she just said I will donate as I am her mum, bizarre & then no explanation.
The final chapter which I wont elaborate on, was not believable in any form from the first page. I am sure the writer thought it would be boring if the character just handed herself in but I ask you would anyone be that stupid & just walk out.
With a bit more thought & if the writer had read through the story before publishing, I am sure, she would of spotted the unbelievable story lines she was writing. This book could of been great, instead it wasn't at all believable.
Most Recent Customer Reviews
Didn't realise there was more than one book in the series but enjoyed it enough to buy the second. Although a little frustrating that bit has typo's in it.Published 7 months ago by Beverley Smith
This glamorous thriller is perfect for fans of Jackie Collins, Rebecca Chance, Victoria Fox and Anna-Lou Weatherley. Read morePublished 8 months ago by Lifestyle&Literature
i really enjoyed reading this book & i am looking forward to the next one in this series.Thank you!Published 9 months ago by Andrea
Although this book isn't the genre I usually read I found it very enjoyable. There's great twists and turns. The characters Melissa and Angie are great. Read morePublished 10 months ago by Lacey
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