- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 584 KB
- Print Length: 287 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Koko Brown (27 Nov. 2011)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B006FKU8J2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Average Customer Review: 5 customer reviews
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #360,396 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Top Customer Reviews
I was totally drawn in to the lust at first sight attraction between Yvonne and Paolo and his pursuit of her kept me reading untill the end.
The only negative was that it felt a little rushed towards the end and it was almost like the author lost interest in tying up the loose ends. For example, there was no real 'ending' for Robbie and Yvonne despite their relationship being for appearances only. I felt like that it was left to the reader's imagination of how the final went.
First up, the story is set in Serie A (it's like the Italian Premiership), and the writer gets it. The WAGS (wife and girlfriends), the whole notion of excess (football players in the top teams can get up to £250,000 a WEEK, and they can flash the cash). The atmosphere fairly bursts from the work when reading it. You can almost smell the sweat and flinch from the excitement.
Off the field, the action isn't so bad either. Yvonne and Paolo do fall for each other, and there's a bit of cloak and dagger (and Italian carnivale) as they consummate their relationship. The only hitch in the characterisation for me was the fact that Paolo seemed a lot older than his years (he's twenty four in the book, iirc, but he comes across as a guy nearer to thirty) - footballers (if you look at the redtops over here) tend to be tearaways until their late twenties, but that's just a quibble.
Another quibble is the fact that the story was just too short! 59,000 words? That's about 100 pages, or thereabouts. But I can understand the writer wanting to leave them begging for more. There's also an excerpt of another story.
One of the better self/independently 'published' stories out there.
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