- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 203 KB
- Print Length: 22 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Porcupine Publications (8 Jun. 2011)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00558UWS2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Average Customer Review: 3 customer reviews
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #1,050,155 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Ouija Be My Friend? - Horror and Mystery Short Story Kindle Edition
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Top Customer Reviews
So here it is, an absolutely fabulous scary story of the ghost of a serial strangler, two young sisters who just so happen to be twins, a nursing home and the twins grandfather.
Not wishing to give too much away about this story but suffice to say the Ouija board, scary porter and a seemingly innocent nurse are worth paying attention to.
This is such a fun read and honestly it is scary! Fabulously well written and skilfully crafted, Mr Lupo has managed to develop excellent characters an amazing plot and all the tension and suspense you could ever hope for in this short story.
A brilliant read and a lot of fun. Thank you Mr Lupo for scaring me to death.
from the story at the end. The girls' mannerisms were completely ridiculous! Could have been so much better without the swearing.
Most Helpful Customer Reviews on Amazon.com (beta) (May include reviews from Early Reviewer Rewards Program)
Unfortunately I found the characters a bit flat. I didn't connect with them or like them. I also have a very hard time with the dialog used for Catherine and Rita. It was forced and actually comical at times - times that weren't meant to be funny. I feel the author was trying too hard to make the tween girls sound young and over shot it immensely.
I downloaded this as a freebie and feel it was a fun read. It would be even better with a rewrite.
It was a decent story, aimed completely at young adults. But the main characters attitudes and swearing got on my nerves. There was no need for it.
The editing for Kindle was also a little off. No paragraph breaks and whatnot to signify that it was the next day/next week, and both characters dialogue ran into each other a few times.
It was a nice (although a little predictable) story, which could be found in one of those collection of scary stories books. But what ruined it for me was the editing and the snotty attitude of the girls.
2.5/5 from me.
Now, if grandpa had killed the little twits with the Ouija board at the end, THAT would have been a story.