This is the first book I've read from Chantelle Atkins and I loved it. I'm amazed that this is her debut novel, it was that good.
It is an emotional, character driven tale about a sixteen-year-old girl coping with the difficulties of being a teenager and living within a broken family (her mother is separated from Lou's father and is in a new relationship.)
Lou doesn't want to be that overlooked, overweight girl anymore. The passages about her not wanting to eat are powerful and frightening to read.
The Mess of Me is also a tale of friendship, of love, mothers, daughters, parents and sons. There are many hard hitting topics throughout including escalating family violence, alcohol and drug use, drug trafficking, self harm, and cries for help but these subjects are handled with great sensitivity. The dialogues are sprinkled with wonderful teenage banter to add touches of humour to lighten the narrative.
Brilliantly done!
My two favourite characters were Lou and her best friend Joe who she's known forever... since she was a baby! Marianne, and Joe's older brothers Travis and Leon were also well written as were all the adults in the book. Perhaps the only character I felt less connection to was Sara, Lou's older sister.
Life can be confusing and awkward for teenagers but this also applies to adults too! I loved how The Mess of Me conveyed our vulnerability, our frailness, how making mistakes and bad choices can have a huge impact on our lives and the lives of those we love. Sometimes parents get it spectacularly wrong and The Mess of Me does a fantastic job of portraying that flip side too.
There are many wonderful scenes with Lou and her mum chatting, drawing closer together, beginning to understand each other. I was so touched by these, having two daughters myself, remembering those teenage angst flare ups made me cry. As a parent all you want is for your children to be happy, safe and well and when that is threatened the fear and helplessness is immense. I don't want to go in too much detail for fear of spoiling the book for you but The Mess of Me portrayed that fear and hopelessness so well.
After finishing The Mess of Me I was left with a sense of hope rising up from this dark tale. I enjoyed it on so many levels.
I will definitely read more from this author. One of my favourite books of 2021.
Highly recommended - 5 stars.
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"This is the first book I've read of Atkins, and I was duly impressed. The story is meant for Young Adults, but it's a glorious read at the adult level, too. The lives of troubled teens, from anorexia to self harming. As it's written in first person, it brings the reader into the story and the mind of Lou, the MC, making the reader share her experiences. It's a long story but well worth the dramatic read. Very gripping and emotional. Highly recommended." - Amy's Bookshelf Reviews
"It's a wonderful thing when you discover a fresh new voice such as Chantelle Atkins whose YA novel `The Mess Of Me' is a compelling read.
At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner." - Kate Rigby, Author
"I'd definitely describe this book as gripping and intense but also full of dark humour, which I loved. I was grateful for the humour too, because like Lou, the novel is unrelenting in it's passion and the storylines running through it are all so impactful and dramatic, the relief is welcome." Amy Bratley- Author --This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition.
"It's a wonderful thing when you discover a fresh new voice such as Chantelle Atkins whose YA novel `The Mess Of Me' is a compelling read.
At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner." - Kate Rigby, Author
"I'd definitely describe this book as gripping and intense but also full of dark humour, which I loved. I was grateful for the humour too, because like Lou, the novel is unrelenting in it's passion and the storylines running through it are all so impactful and dramatic, the relief is welcome." Amy Bratley- Author --This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition.
About the Author
Chantelle Atkins was born and raised in Dorset, England and still resides there now with her husband, four children and multiple pets. She is addicted to both reading and music, and is on a mission to become as self-sufficient as possible. She writes for both the young adult and adult genres. Her fiction is described as gritty, edgy and compelling. Her debut Young Adult novel The Mess Of Me deals with eating disorders, self-harm, fractured families and first love. Her second novel, The Boy With The Thorn In His Side follows the musical journey of a young boy attempting to escape his brutal home life. She is also the author of This Is Nowhere and This Is The Day.
--This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition.
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"This is the first book I've read of Atkins, and I was duly impressed. The story is meant for Young Adults, but it's a glorious read at the adult level, too. The lives of troubled teens, from anorexia to self harming. As it's written in first person, it brings the reader into the story and the mind of Lou, the MC, making the reader share her experiences. It's a long story but well worth the dramatic read. Very gripping and emotional. Highly recommended." - Amy's Bookshelf Reviews
"It's a wonderful thing when you discover a fresh new voice such as Chantelle Atkins whose YA novel `The Mess Of Me' is a compelling read.
At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner." - Kate Rigby, Author
"I'd definitely describe this book as gripping and intense but also full of dark humour, which I loved. I was grateful for the humour too, because like Lou, the novel is unrelenting in it's passion and the storylines running through it are all so impactful and dramatic, the relief is welcome." Amy Bratley- Author --This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition.
"It's a wonderful thing when you discover a fresh new voice such as Chantelle Atkins whose YA novel `The Mess Of Me' is a compelling read.
At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner." - Kate Rigby, Author
"I'd definitely describe this book as gripping and intense but also full of dark humour, which I loved. I was grateful for the humour too, because like Lou, the novel is unrelenting in it's passion and the storylines running through it are all so impactful and dramatic, the relief is welcome." Amy Bratley- Author --This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition.
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- ASIN : B01DZZ0FIS
- Publisher : Pict Publishing; 3rd edition (7 April 2016)
- Language : English
- File size : 2901 KB
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- Print length : 368 pages
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It's a wonderful thing when you discover a fresh new voice such as Chantelle Atkins whose YA novel `The Mess Of Me' is a compelling read.
At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner.
The book is told through the eyes of Lou Carling who begins each new episode with `Dear World' in a bid to communicate her locked-in feelings out there. Lou has just turned sixteen and her nana once told her `that everyone should have at least one good summer in their lives, one summer they never forget'. Lou and her best friend Joe discover something in Joe's older brothers' wardrobe and what starts out as an adventure soon lures them into something much darker and altogether more menacing.
Lou and Joe have known each other since they were babies and there are some cracking lines. Says Lou, "we were in our mothers' stomachs, face to face almost, forced to sit in uterine liquid and listen to their spiteful gossip endlessly".
We soon care very much about what happens to Joe, and to Lou-and-Joe. Though often hard-hitting, there is an emotional bond and an underlying tenderness between the two, which never gets sentimental and which has you routing for these soulmates. The banter between them is wonderful. Then there is the weird and enigmatic Marianne, a complex and disturbed character from a different background but finds herself drawn into the summer of adventure. Each has their own particular issues and way of coping and Atkins' story bristles with emotional tension and teenage angst. "I watch the red beads forming along the line...the red beads grow fatter and fatter and start to blend into each other...I watch the beads form an orderly line." This observation from Lou of Marianne self-harming is pure poetry.
The story is told with warmth, humour and vitality and I hope such a raw natural talent will be recognised by a mainstream publisher who can give this book and the author's other books the treatment and attention they deserve. Highly recommended.
At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner.
The book is told through the eyes of Lou Carling who begins each new episode with `Dear World' in a bid to communicate her locked-in feelings out there. Lou has just turned sixteen and her nana once told her `that everyone should have at least one good summer in their lives, one summer they never forget'. Lou and her best friend Joe discover something in Joe's older brothers' wardrobe and what starts out as an adventure soon lures them into something much darker and altogether more menacing.
Lou and Joe have known each other since they were babies and there are some cracking lines. Says Lou, "we were in our mothers' stomachs, face to face almost, forced to sit in uterine liquid and listen to their spiteful gossip endlessly".
We soon care very much about what happens to Joe, and to Lou-and-Joe. Though often hard-hitting, there is an emotional bond and an underlying tenderness between the two, which never gets sentimental and which has you routing for these soulmates. The banter between them is wonderful. Then there is the weird and enigmatic Marianne, a complex and disturbed character from a different background but finds herself drawn into the summer of adventure. Each has their own particular issues and way of coping and Atkins' story bristles with emotional tension and teenage angst. "I watch the red beads forming along the line...the red beads grow fatter and fatter and start to blend into each other...I watch the beads form an orderly line." This observation from Lou of Marianne self-harming is pure poetry.
The story is told with warmth, humour and vitality and I hope such a raw natural talent will be recognised by a mainstream publisher who can give this book and the author's other books the treatment and attention they deserve. Highly recommended.
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