- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 139 KB
- Print Length: 32 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Twisted Myth Press (14 Feb. 2012)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00797QVT6
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
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- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #1,335,889 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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At first I wasn't sure I'd like this story. The author's repeated use of words like: whitish, greenish, longish, brownish, whitish-green, unhealthy-looking, infected-looking, wet-sounding, helpless-sounding.... There was so much of this stuff in such a short space that it was driving me absolutely nuts. Every time I can to one of these I'd say, "Again?!" and it'd throw me out of the story. I was very tempted to put it down and not bother finishing it. I also felt that, in one or two places in the beginning of the story, the pacing was wrong. There was description and exposition where there should have been dialogue. My last gripe is that there were too many 'green' words, which you'll understand if you read it.
Things definitely get better once all the above stuff settles down. I cringed with disgust pretty much the whole way through the story, which I'm sure will please the author :) And when the action really gets started, it hardly stops, right until the last sentence. I could picture everything happening quite clearly, especially the ending. Plus, the way the story finishes leaves you with a question mark. I used to hate that when I was younger, but it's actually how I prefer a story now.
Overall, a good, gross story. A bit of tweaking at the beginning would help, but based on the rest of his writing, I'd be willing to read more by this author :)