- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 235 KB
- Print Length: 57 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Imperial Guard Publishing, LLC (22 Nov. 2011)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B006CBK7F4
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Average Customer Review: 11 customer reviews
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #395,809 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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The Journal Of Avery Moore Kindle Edition
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The Journal of Avery Moore The Journal Of Avery Moore was a bit of a departure for him from his usual writings and for me as a reader, in that it was a horror story,.....
I often think, as I suppose many readers do, of meeting my favourite authors, well, I think I am going off the idea of actually meeting Mr Hicks, anyone that can wake up in the middle of the night with such a twisted story embedded in his mind might not make for a best friend, there has to be a hint of madness lurking behind those eyes.
The Journal Of Avery Moore is a short story charting the kidnapping, imprisonment and torture of a nice man, who happens to be a lawyer, yes I know ,but there are nice lawyers out there I know two...
Avery Moore chronicles the depravity of his time in captivity, without knowing why he is here or indeed how long he has been there. And, when that is finally revealed, that is the final act that almost tips him into the insanity that he has been slowly slipping into, crucified on a medical bench during his captivity.
This is a short, well written book with thirteen short chapters but they are so intense in places that you do find yourself breathing heavily especially when Avery wakes up and discovers his predicament and how he has been `stitched up". As they say, "Oh My God" who would have thought of writing something like that, Well Hicks clearly did and it works, scary but riveting.Read more ›
It does indeed hark back to Edgar Allen Poe in its style; first person almost matter of fact recounting of a `true' tale. I use true in inverted commas and only hope I'm surmising correctly, otherwise Mr Hicks, I'm not surprised you changed the name and I hope you get over the ordeal eventually. The mastery with which Journal of Avery Moore is written is worthy of likening to Poe and a joy to read. The recounting of the tale in such a straightforward manner serves to add to the horror of it all and it's one I'll recall with clarity for a long time to come.
Macabre seems the best word for the story itself but I'm not sure it conveys quite enough. Macabre, grim, gruelling; I could go on picking at adjectives but really this is a tale that gives you a chill in the pit of your stomach, not your spine. It's disturbingly real and picks up on that fear we all have lurking somewhere of what other people might be capable of doing.
In movie terms, I couldn't help but think along the lines of Saw although the story bears no resemblance. It's the level of darkness and grip on the reader that strike a chord. The Journal of Avery Moore is very visual, for reasons that will become apparent when you read it. I was getting a headache from looking at the picture it conjured in my mind's eye. That's not a complaint, Michael, that's just how real you made it!
I could wax lyrical about this novella for pages but I think I've said quite enough to make it clear that there is no reason on earth not to read it. It won't take long, it certainly won't bore and it definitely will entertain. Buy it or miss out!
At first what bothered me was the terrible writing in this man's "journal". Sentences like "I was entirely alone with my thoughts, wondering when the next indignity would be visited upon me."
Then I got to material even more terrible, and I'm not talking about sentence structure or word choices. It seems the sister liked to come in at night and, after removing the catheter in his penis, force him to the point of sexual climax....and then use a stun gun on his....scrotum. Then she shoves the catheter back up his penis and heads out. The author describes the next few days/weeks like this:
"The rhythm of my life for I know not how long was defined by the visits of both twins to replenish Victor's blood with mine, and to satisfy Giselle's seemingly insatiable lust.
After the first time she took me, of course, I knew what was coming, and my body refused to rise to the occasion. She solved that problem by injecting some sort of drug into the shunt in my arm, leaving me with a painful erection that sometimes lasted for hours."
The blurb for the story hints at dark material but this is, at heart, nothing more than sadistic porn with revenge tacked on.
The blurb also compares this to Edgar Allan Poe's "The Pit and the Pendulum". I sincerely hope that Mr. Poe has gone to his heavenly reward and is thus not spinning in his grave. If the overly wordy, flowery, badly constructed prose was an attempt to make us think of Poe, then the author shouldn't have set the story in the present.Read more ›
Most Recent Customer Reviews
greatb book realyenjoyed it, i dont usually do novellas but i thought this was well written.Published 12 months ago by purple lady
I did not enjoy this book. I have enjoyed all of his other books. I feel he should stick to sci fi.Published 20 months ago by Raycee
Good short story but very short and from my perspective a little predicable. The protagonists were too two dimensional I would have liked more backstory and more depth to them. Read morePublished on 24 April 2013 by Mr. P. Crowe
I accidentally discovered Michael R Hicks through Twitter & now I'm a big fan of his books.
This one is a horror/thriller which will put you in the heart of the action so you... Read more
There is something quite delightful in a good horror and this is a good one but check your blood group before reading and do not visit hospital.Published on 28 Oct. 2012 by technophile
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