What a fantastic story this was you can certainly see where Lisa Helen Gray is going with her leading male characters, sexy, passionate and completely devoted, no nastiness, I'm talking about Dean of course, it's beautiful, don't ever change it. Yes there was some spelling and dictation mistakes but so what the story was portrayed brilliantly it didn't matter and don't forget this is Lisa's debut novel. It was gripping stuff throughout especially towards the end it had all the ingredients you could wish for..! Let me tell you, I read "Better left forgotten" first which is L.H.G. 2nd novel and there are no dictation /spelling mistakes and be prepared for another outstanding read.. 5* easy Very talented Author, thank you and I'm looking forward to more..!!
This is a fantastic novel that had me gripped from the start.
The story is centred around the two main characters Lola and Dean. Lola is trying to escape her past and start a new life having just fled from an abusive partner. She moves back to her families cabin and meets up with her childhood friend Dean. The two immediately reconnect and their feelings for each other develop. Lola knows that Dean will not hurt her in any way and begins to open up to him about her past. I won't give anything away but I will say that you really must read this or add it to your TBR.
It is beautifully written and a very emotional read - I believe that you won't be disappointed. Looking forward to reading more from this author.
In the last few weeks, I have read all of lisa Helen grays books, I started with reading Malik, the Carter brother's series, which was fantastic, and I am currently waiting for the next Carter brothers book. I then read all of the forgotten series, again it was absolutely fantastic, and now this one which was so good I couldn't put it down, this author is definitely one of my favourites.
This was far too long, boring, predictable and drawn out. I only got to chapter 12 and rolled my eyes and skipped to the epilogue. There were so many grammatical errors too. I think as the other reviewer said, get better beta readers and editor because I can't believe they would have ALL missed such poor grammar?
I read this book in 2 days, I couldn't put it down it had me hooked from the first page, it's not a fluffy romance book it will pull at your heart strings,you will go through every emotion it's possible to go through ,from anger to joy but it's an amazing book and so beautifully written,I can't wait to see what the author writes next
This story was hard hitting the characters were believable it had it all tense sad and consuming what it lacked there was so many mistakes wrong words extra words that made no sense I had to keep putting the right words in myself and this was a distraction from the story so sorry only three stars.
The story had great potential, tackling a really difficult subject about surviving domestic violence. The story was easy to follow and therefore easy to read.
However, I found that the story was extremely predictable. The grammar and spelling was truly awful in parts, which left me wondering whether it had even been proof read let alone edited. These Flaws distracted me a great deals from the actual story, which was in parts unneccesarily padded out.