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Hop it Aliens
on 22 April 2017
The story starts with a race called Tauraxon's testing a device that had been locked away on the planet Hope for centauries, The Tauraxon race are hell bent on being the ruling race over all others in the milky way and will stop at nothing to achieve this goal.
Cut to Earth and meet Jack Norton, a school boy who feels he is destined to save the Earth from destruction, (to reduce this review down I will only give bare details) Jack is abducted and taken to the Planet Hope where he joins the Hopite people.
Jack returns to Earth along with some Hopite agents as they believe that the Tauraxon's are up to something?.
That is all I will give you about the story, but there are a couple of things that did annoy me?
1) One minute we are travelling around the Milky way and then we are on Earth, this felt like it was a different story completely, I had to check that I was still reading the same book.
2) jack had an implant put into his head to enable him to communicate with other agents, he was told to practice with this so he could learn how to communicate without speaking.
3) When is Jack and the rest of the crew using this form of communication as it is most times not clear, I feel italics while talking via this implant would of been a bitter way of indicating when this was used.
Apart from that not a bad story but could of been improved especially with comment 3 above.
Still a good story and worth a read, the ending is a cliff-hanger so be warned