- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 118 KB
- Print Length: 24 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Amaya Books (3 Aug. 2012)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B008SVCWR2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Average Customer Review: 1 customer review
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #844,297 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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In a few ways this story is a bit of a disappointment compared to that story. It is much shorter and doesn't begin to plumb the depths of the world within that that story did. But, I also suspected, from the blurb and story length, that this wouldn't be much more than an erotica story, and that was fine with me.
The story follows Kit, who is turning nineteen and determined to seduce his boss and savior. Just over a year ago, while still a minor at 17, Kit was a throwaway and picked up by Leon on the steps of the older man's restaurant. For reasons that the man won't completely divulge, other than pure philanthropy, Kit is given a place to stay and a job at the restaurant. The place and Leon soon become his new family, but Kit can't help but still want Leon, just as he did from that first meeting. But Leon won't make the final leap, even though Kit suspects the man has feelings for him too. With determination, Kit's surprise for Leon is derailed by a mysterious tattoo appears on his back and he starts drawing all kinds of strange attention from weird strangers.
Though this does has one rather steamy scene, just rounding out the short story, even rated as an erotical story this was only so so for me. Most of the reason is the length. If the focus of the story was only sex, then I might not have been bothered, but a rather complex world is just barely hinted at, and it only made me want to understand all the questions that went unanswered. Sadly, the one scene that didn't seem to further the story that had already been set up made me a bit frustrated. And though it was hot, it wasn't enough for me to be satisfied.
I'm looking forward to reading more of Arvel Amaya's work, perhaps the sequel to Unseen Touch. But, sadly, at $2.99 for only 8k words, it just isn't worth it, in my opinion. If I were you, I'd skip this one and read the other story.