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- Language: English
- ASIN: B004SI455Q
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- Average Customer Review: 45 customer reviews
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #11,110 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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Eternal Eden (Eden Trilogy Book 1) Kindle Edition
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Then halfway through it all went tits up.
All of a sudden these two people -practically strangers - were declaring their unending, undying, eternal love for eachother, to the extent that would make anyone who wasn't a thirteen year-old YA dark romance obsessed little girl feel rather sick. The imediacy and ferocity of their love wasn't romantic, or enthralling, it was just plain unhealthy. As a reading experience, it wasn't a smooth transition. They didn't glide into romance poetically, and gracefully as the genre demands. It was like being hit by a truck. The book became PACKED with cliches and some of the wost characterization I've ever witnessed.
Such a shame, because the original plot idea was so promising, and the main characters in the first few chapters were fantastic! One star for the start, two stars for the potential that the author shows. Such a waste of a really good beginning. All this book needs is some heavy duty editing, and I would gladly give this book a second chance.
To top it off, the secondary main character William who she claims to love is just as wealthy as her. This does not seem very well thought through in general as part of the plot; the main character is flaky and inconsistent at best, the romance between them cliche and seemingly founded on nothing but the fact that they like the way the other one looks. Despite the explanation of how her stereotypical one true love has had visions of her for 200 years, frankly the 'relationship' between them is verging on ridiculous.
Whilst I would hope to see it get better and actually have the writer consider the plotline a bit more, I cannot bring myself to pay for a second novel to see if they actually have a relationship beyond attraction and self-pity which they share between them throughout the majority of the novel.
This being said, the writing in itself is not awful; the lack of plotline and development just makes this a pushing read at best and extremely unentertaining.
Most Recent Customer Reviews
i didnt even finish reading this, it failed to keep me engaged, i didnt like the story hence the reason i stopped reading. sorryPublished 14 months ago by Kim Sharp
Really good book and looking forward to reading the next one, at first thought it was going to be predictable but it wasn't it has a lot of good twists and keeps you reading.Published 19 months ago by dreamer
If you liked Twilight you will like these books. The story line is very similar to Twilight but still had me gripped. Really enjoyed all three, struggled to put them down! Read morePublished on 17 Sept. 2014 by Toni tanner
Before I start, I have to say that unfortunately this is going to be a rather negative review. It is my opinion, and I acknowledge that not everyone will agree with or appreciate... Read morePublished on 18 Mar. 2014 by VeeVee
Got me gripped right from the sart, would recommend to all types of readers. Good first book of the setPublished on 22 Feb. 2014 by Amazon Customer
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