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- File Size: 979 KB
- Print Length: 380 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: PL & EF Daniels (22 Sept. 2010)
- Sold by: Amazon Media EU S.à r.l.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B004477YCM
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- Word Wise: Enabled
- Average Customer Review: 2 customer reviews
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #1,804,900 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Well worth trying this talented author, looking forward now to reading more of her work.
Daniels proves herself as one with a good understanding of human nature. Her characterizations are consistent, even with the transformations and maturation of personalities. Deacon himself displays aspects of the Byronic hero, a man whose inner darkness drives a self-destructive attitude towards those who surround him. We are slowly drawn into his inner turmoil, and while much of this is elicited through his scenes with Magenta, the interest gave purpose to the otherwise overly-romantic sections. With that being said, there were still moments when I wanted to knock him upside the head for being so slow to make up his mind.
Many of the names, as well as the fantasy realm itself, seem to draw heavily from Tolkein. The similarity of elven attributes was difficult to ignore, and while this facilitated the process of picturing an ethereal race, it took away from the mysticism of it all as my mind started drawing parallels between Tree of Life and Lord of the Rings. Fortunately, the creativity of the plot, as well as the well-paced storyline, maintained my interest in the reading at hand. Daniels displays a firm understanding of "show, not tell," as she introduces the reader to concepts and characters without giving excessive background information. We learn the details as we would in real life -- through conversation, action, and events.
For the most part, the text flowed quite readily. The author's sense of rhythm and sentence structure is well-developed, and complex ideas are conveyed in lyrical prose without becoming cumbersome in their dense verbiage. Even so, there were some paragraphs where unintended redundancy marred the effect. If something is described as shocking, for example, then we need not to be told that the character was shocked. Appalled, or amazed, perhaps, but certainly not a word that was already used. Additionally, the overuse of variations of the word "caress" began to wear at me by the end of the book.
With its complex, carefully planned storyline; its believable characters; and the promise of intrigue yet to come, Tree of Life is a novel that propels the reader headfirst into hours of pleasant reading and goads him into swimming frantically towards the final destination: the last page. The ending left me itching for the next installment in this series, and I look forward to finding out the fate of characters that have become dear to me over the course of two days.
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Deacon, the primary protagonist, was not quite as well developed and defined but he was still interesting and imaginative. His quest to find his father and avenge the mis-treatment of his mother is, while not unique in the world of fantasy, understandable and relatable. But his inability to be anything other than morose, cranky and bull-headed takes a bit away from the full development of his character. I would have liked to see more humanity in him.
The secondary characters are very well developed and compelling. The love interest is one of the best I have seen written lately. She brings a lightness to an otherwise very dark story. The dialog was very good and moved the plot forward with skill. But the back-story was lacking in that some of the motivations were not clearly defined and explained.
Overall this is a very good book with the potential to bring an epic story to the genre'. Hopefully in the following novels the small problems will be corrected and the story will form more fully. I did like it and will be reading the rest of the series.
Karen Bryant Doering,
Parents' Little Black Book
Another issue I had with the story is that if I can't understand or identify with the characters, I find it difficult to stay interested. I'm sure the author meant to portray Deacon as conflicted, but all I saw was that he was cruel, angry, bitter, and pretty much just like his father. Each time he had an opportunity to improve his circumstances, he had a bad attitude and made the worst choices and was cruel to everyone in the process. I couldn't stand the character so the story was hard to stick with.
My final issue with the story was the transitioning. It seemed like the plot and timeline jumped all over the place. There was no good explanation for why Deacon's father instantly turned mean after being a loving father and husband. One letter could not have made that big of a difference. There was very little transition between the plot of Deacon's mother and Deacon, and sub plots involving Cade and Brielle popped in and out of the story without much rhyme or reason. And I didn't understand how everyone was so horrified by the idea of Deacon's revenge when they didn't have problems with violence and killing along their trip. Overall there were just too many plot holes and I was irritated every time yet another one popped up.
I will not be reading the next book.
This is Deacon--the protagonist in Elita Daniels' debut fantasy novel, Tree of Life Part One. Abducted and scarred by his cruel and power-hungry father as a child, Deacon's mother risked life and limb to save him from the cruel fate his father planned for him. The bond between mother and son becomes even stronger as they survive the terrifying ordeal, but when Deacon's mother falls in love with the elven man who helps her save her son, her frail, human mortality is only enhanced by the everlasting elven world they live in.
Both set free and ensnared by his mother's death, Deacon embarks on a quest to avenge her and punish his wicked father. Accompanied by his cousins, despite his pleas for solitude, Deacon, Cedrik and Derek find themselves caught up in a strange plot involving a beautiful young priestess-in-training named Magenta. Despite his unwillingness to let himself fall in love, Deacon is enamored with Magenta, and discovers that sharing his vengeance with her is both liberating and dangerous.
There is something about Deacon's inner turmoil that appeals to the soul. As a reader I found myself frustrated and enamored with his struggle to love and be loved. A struggle that continually leaves him feeling empty and enraged, this presents a powerful lesson about the dangers of self-loathing.
For a debut novel from a first-time author, Daniels captures the otherworldly essence often found in works by master storytellers like Tolkien. Tree of Life is both character and plot driven, urging readers to embrace the struggling enigma that is Deacon in hopes that he can be saved--more than anything from himself.
Overall, I give Tree of Life Part One 4 out of 5 stars, and recommend it to fantasy lovers who relish in conflicted characters on a quest to quell their vengeance and discover who they really are at heart. I'm anxiously awaiting the second installment, as Daniels split the novel at the perfect cliffhanger.