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Amateurish, boring, predictable and dull!
on 28 May 2015
It started off well , so after reading the sample I decided to buy it. It had the promise of being exciting. The middle of the book was repetitive, it just went on and on. Nothing really happened! The author tried to create cliffhangers but they just fell flat , as what she wrote was predictable.
After a while , about the in the middle of the book , there was no continuity. The story was just all over the place.
The book got very 'touchy-feely ' regarding the characters, in a way that a young teenager would write about emotions. Not fresh, but rather childish and immature.
The ending was very 'Fairytale ' like. It was also very abrupt.
The author writes like a teenager writing a story for a school essay. And the teacher's comment would be 'Try harder' !
There is no maturity about her writing , her story , or the way it is presented . It is very amateurish. And extremely boring! It appears to me that she is churning out books simply to make money and not because she is an artist .
This is the worst book I've read in a long time. It was a waste of time and money. Infact after a while it was so bad (and predictable) that I was skimm-reading. I wish I hadn't even wasted my time doing that!
I would never ever read a book by this pretend author again , even if it were free!