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Starts well but gets a little confused,
This review is from: Fallen: Beginning (Series of Survival Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
This started so well and drew me in but about half way through it started to become confused with Vires being aware of things that he could do that hadn't been mentioned before. He also got an awareness of himself that seemed to come from nowhere. Other than these odd moments this was an OK read though would've have been completely absorbing for me if it hadn't started changing. Another annoying fact was the changes in tense within paragraphs. This is not unusual for Kindle books but for me it is frustrating as I have to go back and re-read with the correct tense as my mind can't cope!