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Not too bad,
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This review is from: Nothing Special (Kindle Edition)
I know that it shouldn't make a difference to the story in general but bad proofreading really spoils a story, I can ignore the odd typo but when the wrong word is used not just once it drives me mad and detracts from the storytelling eg the two MCs kept getting 'accomodations' for their good work (maybe I'm mistaken perhaps the police get new houses when they solve a case), this is just one example. Anyway, the story was interesting and the theme of abuse was handled well but it still could have been done so much better, the characters were just not rounded out enough and not given enough depth. If a bit more thought had gone into this it could have been so much better.