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This review is from: Intentional (Kindle Edition)
** Received a a copy from the author in exchange for an honest review **
I'm giving this book 3.75 stars. So close to 4 stars, but not quite there.
I really liked this book. I've been reading a lot of romantic books lately, and at some point the general plot becomes quite similar. However this was not as much one of those books. It had different elements to it and didn't quite follow the typical patterns of these books. So it was a great change to a often predictable genre.
It was a great and exciting story line albeit somewhat predictable at times. But the predictability of some parts of the story line suddenly didn't matter as much, when I realized that we are presented by four(!) different points of view. This gives insight into the motivations and thoughts behind all 4 main characters, and not just Mattie's. Also, I liked all the main characters - one of them not so much but I was happy to follow that person as well. But Cade was without a doubt my favorite. Don't know why, but was instantly drawn to him whereas Jeremy took a lot more pages.
One thing, which might not seem a big of a deal to some but that I was VERY happy about was the lack of grammatical errors and just bad editing. There were almost no mistakes, which made me a very happy reader! A lot of current independently published books really lack the final read-throughs, making some of them filled with annoying and glaring mistakes that just jump off the page. So good job (and thank you) MK Harkins for that :)
One of the main issues I have with this books is that it is written in present tense, and for some reason I always have a harder time getting into books that are written like that. I probably prefer them in the past tense. But this will probably just be a matter of preference from reader to reader.
Final words: I really enjoyed this book and it was very quickly finished. Looking forward to more books from Harkins!