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The girl on the red bus on the road to the town centre that passed fifteen sets of traffic lights in ten minutes and........,
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God this was awful! Good idea very badly written! Holland needs to learn how to write! You cannot create suspense using sentences composed of fifty words! I don't want to know the exact number of grains of dust in a carpet, how many different coloured strands, wool or nylon before I walk on it towards the living room door which is made of solid oak and painted green in an old lead based paint with no primer!!!! Get the picture? Remember you are a story teller - hold the audience, take them with you! With grammatical mistakes as well, your editor should be shot!!!