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Bit of a let-down,
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This review is from: The Christmas Throwaway (Kindle Edition)
I thought this book started off well - I downloaded a sample and bought the book on the strength of it. However, I found myself from about halfway through wondering 'when does the plot happen?'
The book seemed to become increasingly formulaic as it went on. I felt I could hear the author planning; we'll put a bj on page X and a sex scene on page X +12...
I would have liked the book to contain more interest than the continual repetition of the protagonist's concern for his sister. The delaying tactics used to drag out that issue to the end of the book seemed a little contrived.