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This would have been so much better had it been longer. It all felt terribly rushed, which you can't really avoid with a short story, I suppose. There is not enough scope to flesh out the characters in a short story so you couldn't really connect with them that well. I liked the story line, although it was pretty obvious where the bit about the child was going to go. It was well written with only the odd missing word so It was fine for a short story and it was free, so worth a read to pass a pleasant hour.