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Excellent, but poorly proofed.,
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This review is from: Queen of the Flowers: Phryne Fisher's Murder Mysteries 14 (Kindle Edition)
An excellent story, well-told and engaging, but - and I'm afraid it's quite a big but - the editing and proofreading of the Kindle version is frankly dire. Sentences are separated, starting new paragraphs in a very confusing way. Chapter headings run into the body text and, worst of all, towards the end some sentences have floated from their proper places into quite unrelated text. Presumably none of this applies to the print version, so I'm honestly puzzled as to why it should be in the Kindle version.
The publishers really need to see to this, as it rather spoils an otherwise good read.
Story - *****, production - **