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1.0 out of 5 stars A novel of suspense. . . ., 21 Jun 2013
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This review is from: He Loves Me Not (Lily's Story, Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
You are in suspense all the way through. . . Waiting for something to happen!

I read all the way to the end because the ocd side of me demanded it but I felt the writing was poor. It was reading an extended version of one of those real life stories in chat magazine.

There is lots of superfluous description of mundane things but no in depth analysis of the character's thought or emotions. I felt disconnected from them all and had no empathy or sympathy at all for Lily because she came across as shallow. Had there been more detailed writing about her as a person, I might have liked her more.

If the writer of this book is under fifteen years of age then it's not bad for a level 2 piece of writing but, anything above that, then they need to revisit their writing class.

Thankfully this was a free kindle book because if I had spent any money on it I would have been bitterly disappointed.
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anee berry says:
loved this book, read I hate to love you by Anee Berry, its an amazing read also
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