Sorry, cannot possibly continue.
, 24 July 2014
This review is from: Joe Carpenter and the Soul Of The Lost Artifact :Mystery & Adventure: (Kindle Edition)
This book may well have the best story in the world to tell, but unfortunately I cannot bring myself to continue beyond chapter 4; believe me when I say I have tried to persevere. Having read hundreds of books , I have to place this one at the top of the list for the worst abuse of the English language I have had the misfortune to encounter - no idea how to properly construct a sentence and, inappropriate and absent punctuation, If the author at all - and I suspect he didn't - employed the services of a proof-reader/ copy-editor, then I would advise they didn't do their job.
It is a shame because I thought there was potentially a good story.
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