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4.0 out of 5 stars A long read, 27 Aug 2012
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This review is from: The Emperor's Shadow War (A Tale of Alus Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
I bought this after reading Battlemage which deservedly rated 5 stars. This was more difficult to read because for long periods the story jumped from one character to the other. While the storyline and writing were good the whole thing seemed to get bogged down for a while in the middle. Our heroes both journey at the behest of seers who hint that what they do will eventually lead to the downfall of the Dark Wizard who has almost won one world and is looking to invade their own. They each learn their own powers, gain allies and eventually win through. A good story which would win an extra star with a bit more editing. This author joins the list of those I will continue to read.
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