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This review is from: Apartment 16 (Paperback)Pity the publishers didn't edit this book better or ask the author to edit. There is
a reasonable story buried in this book. Unfortunately, its very repititive.
In the middle section of the book, whole chapters fly-by with no development. Each chapter its the same - 3 scentences describing what character a or s does. Another 3 pages repeating descriptions made a dozen times before.
As a consequence of this, the book just turned into a bore. Reading it on my daily commute, it made me switch off my Kindle and just stare out the train window for a bit of excitement.