7 of 7 people found the following review helpful
Good idea, very poorly executed,
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This review is from: The Other Place (Kindle Edition)
This was an interesting idea for a story (reincarnation/time travel element), but the writing is abysmal. The storyline jumps around all over the place and the characters are very inconsistent, often changing attitude or motivation from one sentence to the next. This makes it very confusing and jarring to read.
Punctuation also seems to have been inserted by randomly throwing it at the page, resulting in full stops or commas where none should be, and entire paragraphs missing any punctuation whatsoever. I don't believe this has been proofread at all and honestly wonder how on earth it got published - I've seen better writing from children.
I resent spending 64p on this given that I am currently reading a free book that is a hundred times better written. Don't do it!