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3.0 out of 5 stars Would give a 4 for story - gets a 3 due to shocking editing, 10 Mar. 2012
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This review is from: "War Brides" (Kindle Edition)
I enjoyed the story in this book, which is well conceived and written, with likeable characters. It makes for an easy read and I would recommend it, with one reservation; it doesn't appear to have been proof read at any stage! Pages seem oddly formatted for Kindle, with chapters appearing half way down the page (odd as it appears to have been published directly by Amazon), and the book is riddled with incoherent sentences that are badly punctuated, misspelled and often missing pronouns and even verbs. You'd usually expect to spot one or two bloopers in the entirety of a book, but there is at least one per page in this one, which makes it extremely difficult to get into the book properly, as it interrupts the flow of writing while you constantly try to piece together the intended meaning. In conclusion - a good read, needlessly spoiled by careless proofreading. Understand it's a cheapie but it's also a bestseller - not a quality edition!
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