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4.0 out of 5 stars Again - a great story - but poor editing, 25 April 2014
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This review is from: Beginnings: The Trilogy (Beginnings Series) (Kindle Edition)
I am actually gritting my teeth because this author has brilliantly vibrant characters and amazing story lines - BUT where is the editing?

Jacqueline, you could be one of the best in this genre...but whoever does your editing needs to get another job. This trilogy is fast paced, realistic and brutal. It tells of a virus that sweeps the globe, killing billions. Those that survive must do so by any means necessary - some keep their humanity - some do not. These books had me laughing out loud and also sitting on the edge of my seat - as I said, this author is brilliant at amazing characters and story lines and for that reason I gave this 4 stars.

I would recommend these books for the story line - but be warned if like me you cannot ignore bad editing - this may not be for you.
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