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Grammatical errors galore.,
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This review is from: Rave (Kindle Edition)At 50% through this book I seriously wondered if I could keep going. The grammatical errors were two to a page at least which I found distracting as the errors meant words with completely different meanings were being used. My favourite of these was "reefs" for "wreaths" which did make the trip to the cemetery appear more vivid. The odd one or two I can live with but there were an awful lot in this book. The story was OK, if a bit far fetched but we are reading fiction here so that is allowed, although there did seem a lot of padding out of the storyline. I did have to speed read to get to the end. I don't think I will be reading any other books by this author unless he would like me to proofread them, which I am happy to do.
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Initial post: 8 Mar 2012 13:02:55 GMT
I so agree with your comments. I did manage to get through the book but it was a real struggle.
In reply to an earlier post on 11 Apr 2012 11:07:16 BDT
Last edited by the author on 11 Apr 2012 11:08:17 BDT
I'm half way through and struggling with the errors.
Liking the story but it really should have been proofread... child-like mistakes.
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