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2.0 out of 5 stars great concept but poor characters, 1 Jan 2014
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The concept is what drew me but the execution of the plot and characters was for me, quite poor to the point I lost interest. The characters would more suit teen girls. The main character is weak and simply infeasible even in the context of the book. There is little if any hard action and I was lost as to the point of the main character. One or two parts are just plain silly but its the lack of pace, action, interesting characters and character interest that just spoils it. The secondary characters are better developed but really position it as female ten fiction. I think that group may like it but I didn't and doubt I'll read the authors work again
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