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This review is from: His Every Whim (Kindle Edition)
I quite enjoyed this story although it was too short to feel their connection or believe they fell in love (especially on Zander's part). It was also a little predictable and one part reminded me of a scene from the film Pretty Woman! Zander seemed very alpha male in the beginning but then his character changed too quickly and that disappointed me.
I downloaded this for free. I would like to read the second part but feel it is too expensive for such a short read. I am puzzled by the price of some of these short stories. It would make more sense to offer them at a cheaper price and surely more people would download them.