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2.0 out of 5 stars Such a shame!...it totally destroyed the beauty of the first two books..., 7 Nov. 2013
This review is from: Grounded (Up In The Air Book 3) (Kindle Edition)
If you have read the first two books, In Flight and Mile High and haven't read this one, then STOP there buddy! consider yourself warned and very LUCKY! for you don't have to suffer and agonize like most of us who have read it. I have no idea what the heck the author was thinking, did she think if she filled the entirety of this book with a non-stop sex after raw sex scenes it'll make for a good story? really? This woman, Bianca, has many talents, one of them is she can orgasm a hundred times when her boyfriend James barks the order...she orgasms if the gentlest wind touches her skin, if James says she can't have an orgasm, then she doesn't... when he says yes she can, she orgasms...if he so much look at her she orgasms, I swear she orgasms on cue! and practically almost every page, such an overkill and such a farce! Jeez! This book has no substance, the dialogue seems like it was written by a bunch of teenagers gossiping with nothing better to do, which is clearly just a filler to drag the pages longer. Pages and pages were spent with Bianca describing what she or the other person is wearing...short shorts paired with red wedge... pencil skirt with a man's dress shirt and killer high heels... shirt with a bold logo slashed on the front paired with jeans riddled with holes...an entire 30 or so pages was used up talking about simple photo shoot and that's mostly describing ( oh yeah, take a guess! ) the colors and neck ties and type of pants the model was wearing! sheeze! and the rest of the pages except maybe the last 40 towards the end, was plain porno sex scenes. If only I didn't work so hard for the money I spent for my Kindle Fire HD, I would have banged it on the wall to get the frustration out of me! This is our reward for waiting anxiously for so long for the final book??? It could have nicely ended on the second one. This authors are dragging out the story unnecessarily just to get another book to sell to us and getting away like bandits! Give me a break!!
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