I appreciate your five-star rating of my book, Chewy845. I tend to just ignore the odd really poor review and plod on writing what I myself would enjoy reading. Being a free book, it gives readers the insight as to my style and the content they can expect, without having to pay a penny for it.
Nice to think of my story 'flowing like a pacey river'. I may use that line :)
Should you download more of my work that is currently on amazon, I hope you find it to be at least as good as you found this one.