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4.0 out of 5 stars Great characters, great love story, some bad dialogue, 10 Sept. 2012
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This review is from: A Younger Man (Kindle Edition)
I've come back and edited this review because I think I liked the book more than I thought at first. I have gone back and read it a second time which is rare because I loved the characters and so I thought my original review was a bit harsh.

I really liked the characters in this book and there were some hot scenes but the dialogue really let it down for me at times. Mostly during the sexy times! The characters say things that make me cringe a little at times. Things like 'if you keep saying such hot and sweet things to me I'll want you even more.' Who actually says things like that?

At times it's as if the author uses dialogue to tell us what the characters are experiencing rather than showing. It's a shame because her characters are really strong and Noah was one of the sexiest heroes I've come across in a long time.

Having said that the sex is scorching, the characters are well drawn and the story keeps you riveted and on side with our two heroes. Despite her at times cheesy dialogue I have to admit I do love Cameron Dane.
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Initial post: 13 Sep 2012 01:51:33 BDT
blogoh says:
Hahaha brilliant review..definitely did make me laugh..i kept thinking "just shut up and get on with it" during those awkward dialogues....still love Cameron Dane though.
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