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1.0 out of 5 stars Drivel (spoilers, if you bother reading to the end), 17 Feb. 2014
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This is poorly written, riddled with spelling mistakes & clumsy, repetitive metaphor. I wish the author had invested in a decent editor. Or even a proof reader with a reading age above 11. There is a bare modicum of research into ancient Egyptian myth, which is clearly courtesy of Google. The author hammers home her point about the resurrected virginal warrioress of the gods, with enough magical powers & righteous vim to make any Mary Sue jealous.... & turns this apparently strong, capable, spiritual woman into a lip-biting, submissive nymphomaniac. The sex scenes are repetitive, unimaginative & juvenile. The inevitable conclusion of the story being she has to get rescued by the male protagonist, who is about as charismatic as a wet dish cloth... & then marries him & pops all-American, baseball playing magical kids. Absolute rubbish.
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