7 of 7 people found the following review helpful
Could do with a good edit ...,
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This review is from: The Half-Life Of Hannah (Kindle Edition)
This is the first time I've read a 20p book. I wasn't expecting much and it lived up to my expectations. Simplistic story, stereotyped characters, irrelevant dialogue, plus scattered with grammatical errors, including homophones like 'wine' and 'whine', that set your teeth on edge, and sentences that made no sense. This author needs the services of a good editor.