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what happend to poor Mathew in the time it took to write this book,
This review is from: Patience (Berkley Sensation) (Mass Market Paperback)
I had been waiting for this book for it seems like years oh yeah it was years.
And oh so far from the lisa valdez that wrote passion. With her first book she took you on a rollercoaster ride from the first page to the last.
Other romantic books take two thirds of the book for the couple to even like each other and the last third to hate,love,like and finally the end in one third to conect and marry !!!!!
And this book never even got of the ground, the connection between mathew and patience was never there even in the scant few pages at the end and why because the rollacoster ride was there but the main two people completly missed it.
I would like us to lay together patience said in the last quater of the book!! and that is the connection for any two main Characters not cucumbers and tears !!! I can understand ms Valdez's Dilemma trying to write a book like Passion but not Passion.
I won't be buying Primrose because I think this author was a one book writer and to try and compete Against passion she surely cannot do it and I have a feeling Primrose will be a Two thirds book with a one third ending sadly.
SazzPatience (Berkley Sensation)