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A book that would be better for a good editor,
This review is from: Homeland (Paperback)
There's a good story in here, trying to get out.
Unfortunately, it's bogged down by poor writing technique. Too much telling and not enough showing. The dialogue also feels rather formal and stilted.
I'd love to see what this writer could do with a decent editor as I like the ideas in the book. The characters are trapped in an endless shopping mall and have no idea how they came to be there. (I don't know why, as I didn't make it past the first few chapters)