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Glad I finished it...,
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This review is from: The World in Reverse (Kindle Edition)
This is the first of Latrivia Nelson's works that I've read. I have Ivy's Twisted Vine and never read it. Hahahaha, and here I read the second part, soooo I'm going to have to go back now and read the beginning. In any case, I enjoyed this one. There were times however that I felt irritated by the constant, 'Screaming' of men, instead of, 'Shouted, Shouting, Bellowed, blazed, growled, barked... there were so many other words that could have been used instead of tough men, constantly SCREAMING... please think about that Mrs. Nelson.
For some reason, due to your bestselling status, I also thought the book would have been more polished. I always feel bad about my own publications when I miss typos, make grammatical errors and I can't wait to be in a position to afford a proof-reader. As I'm not YET - a best seller, I can't afford a proofer, but I have the help of beta-readers. Anyway, I don't feel so bad about my own anymore. Having said that, I will certainly do my best to clean up my mess before it's released, but as we authors know, it's easier said than done.
As for the story, yeah - nice story. While I could put it down, as soon as time allowed, I was picking it right back up again, so that's a good sign. I can't say how many books I've started and couldn't finish because the story just wasn't doing it for me. So if you like a good police story, with a bit of bad/good guys thrown in and all the action as well, here you go. It goes without saying, that I will be reading more of Latrivia Nelson's work - ie; Ivy's Twisted Vine, lmbo... *wink*