3 of 4 people found the following review helpful
Would have been better as a full length novel,
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This review is from: The Italian's Passionate Return (The Alfieri Saga Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
Similar to a Mills and Boon storyline but because it's a Novella, it seemed a bit ridiculous how they meet again and he's asking to marry her within a day and is not very annoyed to find she kept his child from him. We soon learn they know hardly anything about each other. It would have worked better as a full length novel.
I too laughed at him working out the child was his because he was born in January so conceived in September! I also thought both children age 5 and 3 were a bit advanced for their ages.
It was OK for a free read and the author has written books about all Damian and Jemma's children.