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2.0 out of 5 stars rather disappointing, 25 Nov. 2013
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This review is from: Fire Within (Guardian Witch Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
For some reason, I just started losing interest. I really wanted to like this series especially as the first novel showed promise. Although this second novel seems to promise tense action, it's really mostly a long narrative of the ongoing investigation to find the perpetrator behind a series of vampire murders. Some of the more interesting plot lines like Ari's witch background and the reason for her magic bond with Andreas are repeatedly mentioned but not developed. I guess the author was keeping this as a hook for future novels in the series but at this point, I barely care. There is little need for the one of the main male characters, Andreas, to even be a vampire as his strength though regularly alluded to is rarely exhibited. No blood drinking, hardly mention of a fang or anything else you might expect. Now, normally This wouldn't necessarily put me off an urban fantasy novel with a vampire in it so long as there's an interesting alternative angle. There isn't. Not sure I will be carrying on with this series.
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