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1.0 out of 5 stars Cliched drivel, 18 Nov. 2013
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This review is from: Dominic (A Vampire Biker Short Story Series) Season 1 Episode 1 (Disciples of the Damned) (Kindle Edition)
Well, this is only 600 words long, so it is not really surprising that there is not time for anything of interest to happen. It seems designed merely as a hook to get the reader to buy the rest of the series. But I can see no reason to.

Setting: absolutely standard for the modern genre -no interesting twists
Characterisation: non-existent - our hero, immediately upon resurrecting from 1808, thinks in modern slang. There is no sense that his 200 year absence has any real bearing on his thinking (other than a distaste for mixed-race relationships).
Plot: the most obvious revenge scenario imaginable.

If I had PAID for a book that is only 600 words long I would feel cheated. As it is, I am glad that I did not waste any more time on it!
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