Could've Been Better!!,
This review is from: Undone (Fiery Tales Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
This book could've been so good if the author had bothered to develop the story line a little. The story had all the ingredients needed to make a good book. A very wicked villain, danger, thrill, accurate historical data thrown in and amazing chemistry between the hero and heroine.
Instead the author chose to focus only on the chemistry between and it turned into countless pages of sex that just seemed to go on until I was bored. I had to skip some pages to try and get back to the story.
The twist towards the end involving the heroine seemed pointless to me and I felt it was unfair to the other person who was had been such an important character in the story. Based on this book, I wouldn't buy anymore from this author which is a shame because she obviously put a lot of effort researching and all her historical details were sound and accurate. I would've enjoyed it more if she'd built on the amazing storyline.