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3.0 out of 5 stars Disappointed. The story is very slow., 10 Aug 2013
This review is from: Scorched Skies (Fire Spirits Book 2) (Kindle Edition)
The story of Ari, Charlie and the gorgeous Jai continues in this second book in the series. I was very exited to see how the relationships between the characters developed and how the story progressed. I loved the first book so much. However , we get to end of this book and nothing really has progressed in the story. There is a lot of action and fights scenes but they appear to be just filling in the story. The story is really slow. I actually was a little bored and thought the author was just filling out the book so that she could get to the third book. It takes a whole book for Ari to realise her feelings for Charlie and for Jai to work out his true feeling for Ari. I struggled to finish the book. I am not sure whether I will read the next in the series.
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