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The pain was all mine,
This review is from: Fifty Shades of Grey: 1/3 (Kindle Edition)
This book made me laugh out loud, I am not sure it was supposed to.
The writing is lazy, repeating scenes and phrases over and over until I wanted to flog myself. The over use of 'holy crap' 'holy moly' 'jeez' and 'inner godess' are an insult to the readers intellegence.
The female lead Anastasha (she was never going to be a Tracey or a Janet was she?) was irritating and self obsessed. Christian had hope as a character but I cannot waste anymore of my life on these books.
I am all for a bit of escapism but I cannot recommend this book and sleep at night