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This review is from: The Stone (Mythical Lives Series Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
I downloaded this book while it was on the free list and based my selection on the reviews written by others.
In all honesty I think that the book I downloaded must have been an early draft, not the completed book. It read like a series of ideas waiting to be fleshed out. There is no narrative flow at all in my version. I got as far as chapter 18 then gave up as the book was proving much too frustrating to read. How does Ro go from recognising a number plate in a car park to being in love with the owner of the car? Where is the unfolding back story to this event and if there isn't one, why is it included at all as it adds nothing to the plot?
Please check the uploads. If I have inadvertently read an early draft I'm more than happy to read the finished book and amend my review accordingly. I am sorry to say that the version I have read is of very poor quality indeed.