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1.0 out of 5 stars Asylum Harbor, 8 Feb. 2012
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This review is from: Asylum Harbor (A Rachel Scott Adventure Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
I bought this book on deal of the day for 0.99p. I believe this was a waste of 0.99p. The plot could have been great but was completely ruined by the authors inability to weave an interesting storyline. The main characters daughter went missing, so she set up an agency with loads of specialists to find other missing people. None of these specialist were ever used and the investigators knew where to look for the missing girl because something didn't feel right. Other characters popped up with no explanation and disappeared with no explanation. Three quarters of the way through the author got bored and finished the plot within two pages. Other reviewers said that they found the book easy to read, but this was because there was nothing in it.
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