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3.0 out of 5 stars The Danfians Prophecy, 22 Sep 2013
This review is from: The Danfians Prophecy ( An Epic Scifi Fantasy Romance ebook) (Kindle Edition)
I want to thank L. Sengul and the group we 'heart' YA Books for the opportunity to read and review this book.

Firstly I want to say that I really wanted to enjoy this book. I like the idea behind the story... two alien races living on Earth - one who wants to protect and one who wants to rule.

I struggled to read this book for two reasons. I found the writing style did not suit my reading style. It sometimes felt a bit disjointed and there were quite a few errors. Secondly, the POV's kept jumping with little indication or warning. I found it hard to differentiate between the characters as the writing style didn't change with the POV. It felt like the same person was talking and thinking for all of the characters.

I would still recommend this book as the foundations of the story are interesting and just because this book did not suit me personally, in no way reflects how other YA fiction fans may feel about it.

Thank you for the opportunity to read your work. Best wishes for the success of your book.
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