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nice plot; awful dialogue,
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This review is from: The School Gates (Kindle Edition)
This curate's egg of a book has a creative cast of characters, whose lives intertwine in an engaging, yet rather predictable, plot. The author struggles to achieve naturalistic dialogue so the book would be improved were the proportion of indirect speech to be increased.
Furthermore, the reading experience on kindle is hampered by poor formatting: transitions between different aspects of the plot need to be indicated with spacing.