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Could have been so much better.,
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This review is from: Forever Torn (Kindle Edition)
Irritatingly light in style I kept waiting for the background to be finished plotting in and the action to begin. It's a lightweight family story that could have been so much better, thank goodness it was free
The whole text needs justifying. It is irritating to read when words are jammed together and then there are spaces in the middle of a line.