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Ruined by its editing,
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This review is from: Two Men for Me (bisexual threesome menage MF MM MMF erotic romance) (Mrs Harper'sValleys Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
This is not a bad book, just so poorly edited as to be hard to read, in particular, the dialogue. Often multiple speakers are in the same paragraph, then as the story progresses, a new pattern develops of 'X said,' then the dialogue follows in a new paragraph. Generally the prose is good away from any dialogue, though sometimes extends beyond the whole Kindle page and thoughts can be repetitive.
Apart from that, we have a fairly hot, if unconvincing bisexual (MMF) short story. Do I recommend it? Depends how patient you're feeling. I wouldn't read it again.