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Will `Vanish' from my Kindle.,
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This review is from: Vanished (Kindle Edition)
How to cram a story into 100 pages and fail. There are too many characters introduced in almost machine-gun fashion; some of them have relevance, some not, and that's annoying if not down-right confusing. Additionally, all the characters are stock figures. By the end of chapter 3, the main character remains a characterless journalist with an aunt who has a German shepherd. The journalism and detective work left me cringing. Sorry, try any big-name detective author and you'll agree.
I only lost 77 pence on this one. An easy lark for making money out of woeful short stories which should be sold as a set.